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Dear Esra, Şerif and Fatoş,
Your topic is a universal topic and it can be read by anybody in the world. I also recommend everyone to read your work. I think sports should be one of the most basic habits in our life. I think people who do not take part in sport activities will regret. That's why your work is one of the writings that encourages people to do sports. Especially, giving place to the words of famous people on sports is an effective way of arousing the interest of people.
I also try to do sports as much as I can. I think it makes you feel more vigorous and happy. However, I am not interested in a certain sport.
Your organization is very good. Everything is in their proper places. You did some extra work. It contributes your work.
Also, your language is fluent and it did not bore me. I did not see any grammatical mistake. Very good job ! Thanks for your efforts.
Dear friends,
Firstly, I should mention that your sub-categorization is very good. As you are five members, your writing has a more detailed information. That's why a person can learn a lot by reading your work. You talked about every piece of Gaziantep :) Actually, I have never been in Gaziantep but thanks to you, I have an idea about Gaziantep. Of course, meals attract my attention most.
Your language is very fluent and your organization is very good. I did not see any grammatical mistake in your work, as well.
I liked your visual aids (especially the caricature). You introduced us Gaziantep very well. Thanks for all your efforts.
Your topic is a universal topic and it can be read by anybody in the world. I also recommend everyone to read your work. I think sports should be one of the most basic habits in our life. I think people who do not take part in sport activities will regret. That's why your work is one of the writings that encourages people to do sports. Especially, giving place to the words of famous people on sports is an effective way of arousing the interest of people.
I also try to do sports as much as I can. I think it makes you feel more vigorous and happy. However, I am not interested in a certain sport.
Your organization is very good. Everything is in their proper places. You did some extra work. It contributes your work.
Also, your language is fluent and it did not bore me. I did not see any grammatical mistake. Very good job ! Thanks for your efforts.
Dear friends,
Firstly, I should mention that your sub-categorization is very good. As you are five members, your writing has a more detailed information. That's why a person can learn a lot by reading your work. You talked about every piece of Gaziantep :) Actually, I have never been in Gaziantep but thanks to you, I have an idea about Gaziantep. Of course, meals attract my attention most.
Your language is very fluent and your organization is very good. I did not see any grammatical mistake in your work, as well.
I liked your visual aids (especially the caricature). You introduced us Gaziantep very well. Thanks for all your efforts.
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